Kayc-cupcake

Can you all read my story Crazy Beautiful Life? I need opinions on it!!!

LSBeddes

I am a Latter-Day Saint and a teen, along with a writer that has gotten more then his fair share of unfair critique. I know its hard and you say you hate writing, but I hope you read my message on your book. I know what its like to have dream-shattering comments, but you cant give in. Your story couldn't have been very bad if you were courageous enough to share it. I am fourteen years old and I know how hard it is. And I want to help you. I think this is a trial because you were trying to share something sweet and pure with the world and people knock you down. Don't let them. I want to help you and I want help. I can give you some tips and I hope you don't give up.

starwarsfan18

no you need to keep writing, i am Mormon too, don't give up. writing and music help a lot, but sometimes you don't have those commodities. when that happens you just need to take it a day at a time. if you don't want to keep going for you or your friends, then keep going for me. because i have given up so many times in my life and i'm still here. if you ever need someone to help you just call me. my number is:(860)6344211. please don't give up on writing. some people just need to develop their skill in writing so they can compete with everyone else. and you definitely have potential in writing. just so you know people like me are everywhere, so don't you dare ever give up on life. you never know what will happen to everyone else if you do, think of your friends, and your family, they would be devastated if you were to just give up and leave forever just be yourself and everyone will love your writing, i can assure you of this, just do yourself a favor and find out what you like to do the most and just keep doing it. and just to remind you i am always here for people like you and me. just keep going day by day, things will work out in the end whether you believe it or not they will. please feel free to call me if you need to talk. because I've been in your situation before, and it won't be the last time either. just take everything day by day, and don't be afraid to talk to anyone about your problems, because people like me are always there for you to talk to. so don't be afraid to talk because we need to be able to help you out, because i for one would not want to lose you forever. please keep going there is a right person for you out there. just look and you will find him. well i suppose that is the end of what i felt inspired to say to you. because only god could have brought me to see your page. so please don't leave us all alone we want to read what you write, truly write. please don't leave us in the dark about how you really write, i will help you improve it.