Khryomancer

Looking back at my chapters, I really need to edit these things. Jeez.

Khryomancer

@lifeWaster Looking back at it... yeah. I kinda do right now, but not as much(I think) back then. I don’t know.
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Lemoinx

I did that a while ago, I’m content with my beginning ones at the moment.. I doubt they’re as bad as you think
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lifeWaster

I think that you write sort of too formally? I'm not good at writing myself, and i'm not even sure if it's your fic im remembering, so take this with a grain of salt. But like, "portrayed a smile on my face" could just be "i smiled" and things like that. idk i haven't read it in a while
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Khryomancer

Looking back at my chapters, I really need to edit these things. Jeez.

Khryomancer

@lifeWaster Looking back at it... yeah. I kinda do right now, but not as much(I think) back then. I don’t know.
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Lemoinx

I did that a while ago, I’m content with my beginning ones at the moment.. I doubt they’re as bad as you think
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lifeWaster

I think that you write sort of too formally? I'm not good at writing myself, and i'm not even sure if it's your fic im remembering, so take this with a grain of salt. But like, "portrayed a smile on my face" could just be "i smiled" and things like that. idk i haven't read it in a while
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fierzza

Hi random person! I was dragged into some kind of "POSITIVITY CHAIN"! Yay! So, I'm going to make you suffer, and you have no choice but to accept! 
          
          Ok! You have to tell 3 things you like about yourself on 10 different people's boards, while also dragging them into the "positive" chain..
          
          Ok, let's begin..
          
          I like how I am ready to quick to adapt to any situation, no matter what it is.
          I like how much advice I have for my friends, I guess.
          I like how protective I can be of my friends if someone hurts them or tries to.

Khryomancer

Maybe once I’m done with my UnOrdinary story, I’ll probably write a self-inserted character in “Classroom of the elite” since I rarely see them.

Khryomancer

@Zedianx and also, is your plans if COTE (acronym for the anime) is self-inserted characters or alternate timeline?
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