@arty_writes wouldn't it be amazing if they were, though? Of course, Artemis would end up saving the world, and innocent people might die in the process, but hey, still would be kind of cool.
Some of it makes me laugh, like the foaly/opal shipper. :D
Parts of it need buffing up. Or complete reedits. Despite all that, It shouldn't be really any different than it is- I really just wanted to develop the characters more, maybe tone down some of the drama and run-ons.