I also think I gotta do better on the grammer and also edit a bit but the again i'm not the smartest person and it also doesn't help that it was my first story but I will try. Also you do give my hope to write more and I will try to write more chapters but it will take some time because i'm a slow writer and also because I got a lot happening in my family right now so sorry if it takes a long time to get more chapters out.
@Kitten_Markie Thank you for talking to me and saying very nice things but I gtg read some books before it turns "4:30am" so bye hope you have a good day/night
@Puss_In_Boots_11 its alright, I hope that whatever you got going on irl isn't too bad and I wish you the best of luck with everything. I know that writing takes awhile and can become a slow process for some(even me) but I'm sure with the right inspiration and ideas you'll be able to do it and even improve!