Kiyochai

Alright Ladies and Gentledudes! 
          	Hello hello, Author here! 
          	I just want to say The First Chapter of the Newly Revised Wish your Name is out. Just the Prologue so far. 
          	I put in some massive hints which I'm fine with. 
          	Few things have changed, I finally decided whether to spoil these things in the Prologue or not and I've decided. Yeap. Going through with that. 
          	Secondly, I want to write the story to make sure there's no.. plot holes or points where I am writing myself up a wall. So I've had this entire notebook I've made as far as things that may be plotholes in Chapter 1 to 6. 
          	Let me just say that I'm making the villains more of a threat then they are right now. They just seem.. Kinda "There." 
          	So yep, expect next chapter to be different with more changes. The lore still remains the same.. But things like, "The tree in Moriwakure shouldn't be just.. out there in the open for anyone to view if it grants people's wishes." 
          	Things like this. The "Aha.. Uh, why is this a thing" plot gaps that I just threw out there now have some backbone. 
          	I literally have almost 6 pages of things that I need to change and I'm getting through them one by one. 
          	This story is not dead in it's tracks. Just wait. 
          	By the Chapter: SURVIVE It should be on the original track I want it to be on. -- With Some Major Editting for the Yakuza Clan and Alucard. 
          	So! Please look forward to the updates. I will post whenever i make them. 
          	
          	Wish Your Name: Prologue is now complete!

Kiyochai

Alright Ladies and Gentledudes! 
          Hello hello, Author here! 
          I just want to say The First Chapter of the Newly Revised Wish your Name is out. Just the Prologue so far. 
          I put in some massive hints which I'm fine with. 
          Few things have changed, I finally decided whether to spoil these things in the Prologue or not and I've decided. Yeap. Going through with that. 
          Secondly, I want to write the story to make sure there's no.. plot holes or points where I am writing myself up a wall. So I've had this entire notebook I've made as far as things that may be plotholes in Chapter 1 to 6. 
          Let me just say that I'm making the villains more of a threat then they are right now. They just seem.. Kinda "There." 
          So yep, expect next chapter to be different with more changes. The lore still remains the same.. But things like, "The tree in Moriwakure shouldn't be just.. out there in the open for anyone to view if it grants people's wishes." 
          Things like this. The "Aha.. Uh, why is this a thing" plot gaps that I just threw out there now have some backbone. 
          I literally have almost 6 pages of things that I need to change and I'm getting through them one by one. 
          This story is not dead in it's tracks. Just wait. 
          By the Chapter: SURVIVE It should be on the original track I want it to be on. -- With Some Major Editting for the Yakuza Clan and Alucard. 
          So! Please look forward to the updates. I will post whenever i make them. 
          
          Wish Your Name: Prologue is now complete!

Kiyochai

Hello Readers. Update time. 
          So I'll be completely honest. I'm not stuck anymore. My major issue was trying to add characters but their roles in the story came with so many questions. I'm at the point of rewriting the story entirely due to a few reasons: 
          1: The Story feels too fast paced. The Yakuza arc feels WAYYYYY Too Sudden, Wayyy too Drastic, and the main characters just.. recover months later. That's it. 
          Secondly, I want there to be more worldbuilding around certain characters and the ecosystem/economy/supernatural phenomena, That there is a special type of group that deals with it, and these .. Strange phenomena, are like major disasters. much like the major disasters in the western part of the world except Supernatural. 
          I'll get to that eventually. 
          But I want to play around with the idea of a few new entities: Anamolies and what causes them, How people get trapped inside, Who deals with them.
          Spirits of Yomi, Mononuke, And the Demons that Alucard Commands. 
          I wish to make Yomi more of a threat, Since it seems that Alucard is just a simple D Tier Villain. 
          And for the moment, right now, he is. The problem with this Is that I rush sometimes to get to the good part before I send myself into overexplaining hell as to why things are the way they are. 
          Like for New Dawn (If you're caught up.) I'm still thinking about how to write them. Sarai is looking for her mother; One part of me wants her to be a vocalist /guild leader, the other wants her to be a special operative. 
          I'm still at that point of deciding where to put New Dawn as a whole. Because Some Characters would not fill in the requirements to be special forces. 
          If that is the case, then I may have issues with the following chapter until I figure out. 
          In any case, Wish your name is getting a full reboot. The original series is not what I wanted. 
          Thanks for understanding.

Kiyochai

Hello readers, I'm uh going to update a little bit. 
          I'm kind of stuck in both segments of my story. 
          Until I figure out how to get out of this predicament, The story will be on hold until further notice. 
          I'm trying to segment out arcs (Act One) and not just clump them all together in one Major Arc and have it offscreened. 
          So I'm thinking of a way to seperate them. Because there are two villains I'm interested in introducing. Then there's a system that I am trying to push through. But If I push all of them at once, it kind of defeats the antagonists' spotlight. Makes it seem ... rushed. 
          As far as the prelude goes, I have it down, I'm just stuck at a conversation which explains how technologically advanced the world of wish your name is/Will be. It is a little bit of a hassle, because Kiyo's Era is more modern day while The Prelude is.. "working on that part." So I'm thinking of .. you know, Companies. What things would be there from the Prelude and Carry into today without seeming like BS? 
          Cars, Phones are some ideas. 
          But It IS also a fantasy world and not many countries USE Vehicles for Transportation. See my problem yet? 
          Anyways. 
          Wish Your Name will be on hold until I get sorted. Probably continuing around August hopefully. (And Yes, I am using Chatgpt, Novelai, and Claude to help me sort things out and It's still not working out, lol.) So yeah. Um. I need a minute.
          Thank you for Reading Wish your Name. 
          See you in a month or two.

Kiyochai

Hello readers, 
          I recently made some edits to Wish Your Name's Prelude, Specifically the last few chapters, Because it felt like one slap in the face after another full of.. Well, Let's be honest, it was a clusterf*ck of arcs. I now seperated them, giving them the correct pacing. And what should happen first is most definetely Tsubaki's Rivalry -- Her Escalating Hatred for Tamamo.
           I will make a note when I change something. Most times, I have it saved in a draft and intend to use it for later. Because as a Novelist, I tend to want to get to the climax as soon as possible. So I see myself sometimes skipping straight to things that should have an entire arc around it. 
          So that is what I am trying to do is let the arc breathe a bit more.
          Furthering this, I have changed some of the Prelude to give Tsubaki more of a .. Important Role. She is one of the characters that I'm working delicately on. Yes, She is very rude, antagonistic, And I now have a set roadmap of how her story is going to go from beginning to end. Same with Tamamo / Aina. Just getting there is the hard part. Always has been. 
          
          I wish to work on the prelude more, So expect Chapters of Wish your Name to Come out slowly.. (I'm also stuck on a conversation there, NGL, Said conversation is taking some time.)  
          
          So until I figure out said conversation, It's temporarily on Hiatus. 
          
          With that said, The Prelude is currently going through the School Arc. 
          Consistently, I plan to have a few arcs inside the School Arc. 
          
          Please do enjoy, Reader.~ I'm writing these on my days off whenever possible. I really want to get to Act Two sometime this year. 
          
          May the Sun Rise again~
          
          ~Author

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Kiyochai

@CrimsonQuillz of course!~ 
            May our stories grow alongside each other!~
            Happy writing!~
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