Hey there,
This is K. L. Abbott and this is the final edit of the House of Neotar volume from my upcoming science fantasy series, Nescada. This volume, one of six in the novel, has been freshly-edited by my wonderful editor, Nathalie Andrews of Girl and Cat Publishing, and newly-updated here on Wattpad. Following is the Editorial Feedback from GCP, which I share here to whet your palette for what lies within. Enjoy ^_^
Editorial Feedback from Girl and Cat Publishing
The writing is really strong. You basically have everything you need: a fast-paced plot, strong, confident characterisation, good in-character dialogue and lots and lots of imagination and reality. That is the case throughout your work, but it is such a unique thing, as I so often read manuscripts that feel like they are copying what they have seen of someone's favourite genre.
Nescada, for me, is currently sitting in its own little niche (both a blessing and a curse with a first novel) because it straddles a fantasy/spiritual genre and also science fiction. There is a fabulous blending of magic and technology. It could almost be left up to the readership to decide how much is technology by a different name. how much is simply alien, and how much is the divine or the magical.
I'm on the edge of my seat for how all of these characters and events and places finally come together. I'm still a sucker for angst-ridden young men so I'm particularly interested in Dmitri's fate, but that really is purely subjective; I think you've done a great job on all the characters.
I'll be recommending you to many of my friends once it's done :)
Read House of Neotar RIGHT HERE: wattpad.com/story/12084612-house-of-neotar
If you like what you read and I hope that you do, thank you so much for taking the time to review, comment, and of course, vote!! ^_^