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Two questions. 1. Are you familiar with the Expendables franchise ? 2. Are you able to do a story about it ?
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I'm currently working on a brand new spin-off of my Vampire OC series, The "Mark Cole" Saga. I also wanted to take my time and share my love, thoughts and prayers to the people in California who're dealing with a difficult time that's happening with the wildfires. My heart goes out to them, their families, everyone out there. Stay strong, stay safe, look out for one another. Sending love and prayers for Los Angeles.
Two questions. 1. Are you familiar with the Expendables franchise ? 2. Are you able to do a story about it ?
Hey, I was wondering if you could read my Wick & McCallister story and tell me what you think about it please ?
@KnightMorales25 And finally, what do you think of him describing his relationship with each and every one of his family members ? (Also, Kevin knew that his father passed away, he just didn't return for the funeral, I found it very shocking that the actor of Peter McCallister was the only one that passed away ?)
@marvelousand2 The evolution of it is beautiful. Which of course, him and Brenda Song are the real life couple, it really brought a smile on my face.
@marvelousand2 His transition to becoming a hard worker, a cop, to security system maker, to becoming a family, what do you think of this evolution ?
I have a pitch for the next story after Right Thing, Wrong Way. It begins with Axel with his protégé’s Bogomil’s grandson and Inspector Todd’s great nephew (portrayed by Dacre Montgomery and RJ Cyler) and Jeffrey’s youngest son (portrayed by Dylan O’Brien) investigating a crime with Jeffrey (who reluctantly came out of retirement to help with the case) and Captain Fallon. The case goes south leading to the kidnapping of Bogomil’s grandson, Todd’s great nephew, and Jeffrey’s son but it results in Jeffrey’s death. Adam (who now works as a Beverly Hills Police Officer) hears about it and feels guilty about what happened. Stacy is angry with him because Bogomil’s grandson was her fiancee and he went Detroit to train under Axel because Adam gave him advice to do it. Adam received an invite to a police convention in London and coincidentally so did Axel. They both accept the invitation and go to save their friends. But unbeknownst to Adam, Taggart’s son(Joel Kinnaman) and Jon Flint’s grandson (Xolo Mariduena) follow him all the way to London to help him and he reluctantly agrees to let them help. The main villain (Tom Hardy) has a history with Axel and Jeffrey and the side villains (Ruby Rose and Jacob Elordi) have a history with Bogomil’s grandson. What do you think ?
@KnightMorales25 Another plot point to add, Adam and Axel try to make it back in time for Jane and Bobby’s wedding
@KnightMorales25 I have an idea to explain Bogomil’s absence in Beverly Hills Cop 3, he was out of town for his daughter’s wedding.
Potential Titles for future stories of Beverly Hills Cop: Neutron Dance Stir It Up Shakedown Be There Better Way In Deep The Place Where You Belong Here We Go I pitched for different stories. Which title would you think fits the four stories ?
@marvelousand2 I feel like "Beverly Hills Cop: Better Way" would be a better fit.
Channing Tatum and Tom Hardy were considered for potential roles in the Beverly Hills Cop franchise, what roles would you have them play ?
@marvelousand2 I remembered hearing that they were considered in potential roles. If I have both of them playing, maybe Tom Hardy would've been a very decent villain. As for Channing Tatum, he would be this detective guy who would possibly join Team Foley.
I'm currently working on a brand new spin-off of my Vampire OC series, The "Mark Cole" Saga. I also wanted to take my time and share my love, thoughts and prayers to the people in California who're dealing with a difficult time that's happening with the wildfires. My heart goes out to them, their families, everyone out there. Stay strong, stay safe, look out for one another. Sending love and prayers for Los Angeles.
So what did you think of the crossover idea ?
I have big crossover idea. It was discussed that Beverly Hills Cop could have a crossover with Rush Hour and Bad Boys. What if after Adam saves the mayor, he teams up with his father Axel, Carter, Lee, Mike, and Marcus on a case ? Who would be the leader of this potential team ? (Years ago, Chris Tucker said that the Rush Hour 4 would have the same style as Fast Five, that could be the style of this story idea.) 1. This could take place after Right Thing, Wrong Way and before Adam’s international adventures. 2. This could take place before Rush Hour 4 before Lee and Carter’s permanent retirement. This can be a good way for your universe to expand. Now, what do you think of this idea ? Do you like it ? Has it met your approval ?
@KnightMorales25 Okay, so would like to do this after Adam goes International. (Also, I have another casting idea. Xolo Mariduena as Jon Flint's grandson)
@marvelousand2 It seems like an interesting idea to pitch a crossover. But I'm probably not going to get around with that idea just yet. It's too early for Adam to get in the crossover, personally for me.
So, what did you think of the ideas ?
Beverly Hills Cop Ideas: 1. Samuel L Jackson portrays Inspector Todd’s younger brother. 2. Sylvester Stallone, Mickey Rourke, Harrison Ford, Al Pacino, James Caan, and Richard Pryor were all in the running to play Axel Foley. Maybe they could play Axel’s friends from the past. 3. Beverly Hills Cop 2 was originally supposed to be filmed in London and Paris. And the early drafts of Beverly Hills Cop 3 was going to be about Axel, Billy, and Taggart going to London to rescue Bogomil from being held hostage by terrorists during an International Police Convention. There was a draft where Axel has to deal with his celebrity status. Another draft was where Axel teams up with a Scotland Yard detective. The last one was about Axel going overseas against British gangsters who were transported from Detroit to London with Jeffrey transporting them but Jeffrey was murdered, so it was probably going to be a revenge story. I think there was a rejected draft for Beverly Hills Cop 4 where Axel returned to investigate Billy’s murder. So these are the potential stories you could go for. Potential Storylines: 1. Adam goes to London to rescue someone and avenge the loss of a loved one. 2. Adam goes to Scotland concerning a case 3. He goes on vacation to Paris but he gets caught in a case that he wants nothing to do with and teams up with Serge’s son (portrayed by ?) 4. Adam returns and permanently moves to Beverly Hills after Taggart’s death and the attempted murder on Billy (Adam’s godfather) What do you think ?
@marvelousand2 I think the casting is very awesome as well. And I think I can plan on Plot #4 on this. I have a very good plan for it too.
@KnightMorales25 Of course, Adam can go international after #4 but what do you think about the ideas 1 and 2 with the casting.
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