Kookiminia

Hello everyone, hope so you people are doing well. So I discovered another plot hole in my story, as one of my follower enlighten me about it, and don't worry I won't ghost you people for that, mmm... probably. 
          	So frankly speaking I never thought that I need to explain that specific point but when I thought about it, it do need to be clarified, so I will explain that part in epilogue InshaAllah. As I don't want to potray any of my main characters as a red flag, real world have enough of it, fictions can be pure, atleast. 
          	As I told before I am a little dumb as multitasker. So feel free to drop the suggestions and gaps you find in the story, if they are worth improving I  will definitely work on them. Always welcoming constructive criticism. 
          	Thank you.

Kookiminia

@Kookiminia Thank you so much. The thing is that if something is wrong I will always try to think about it and correct it. Secondly sometimes you miss things or don't foresee them, but others can. So instead of taking something on your ego, I try working on it. Offcourse I thought about that part, and i need to explain that part. 
          	  
          	  Basically a reader said that Adam sounds like a cheater or two timer, I thought I explained his part well, but when I thought about her comment, I think so she's right and I need to make changes or clear that part, because  I don't want to portray any character negative, World have enough negativity. 
          	  So I will brain storm about that part. And I open to suggestions. You guys can suggest what more i could add to improve that hole.
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inaarahh

@Kookiminia  what was the plothole? and what I like about you is that most authors ignore when someone comments about it or just say that it's their book and they'd write however they want. I remember the first time I said u can't marry even after 4 month if ur pregnant as iddah prd doesn't end and u changed it. It was my first exprnc that an author takes readers comments seriously
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Kookiminia

Hello everyone, hope so you people are doing well. So I discovered another plot hole in my story, as one of my follower enlighten me about it, and don't worry I won't ghost you people for that, mmm... probably. 
          So frankly speaking I never thought that I need to explain that specific point but when I thought about it, it do need to be clarified, so I will explain that part in epilogue InshaAllah. As I don't want to potray any of my main characters as a red flag, real world have enough of it, fictions can be pure, atleast. 
          As I told before I am a little dumb as multitasker. So feel free to drop the suggestions and gaps you find in the story, if they are worth improving I  will definitely work on them. Always welcoming constructive criticism. 
          Thank you.

Kookiminia

@Kookiminia Thank you so much. The thing is that if something is wrong I will always try to think about it and correct it. Secondly sometimes you miss things or don't foresee them, but others can. So instead of taking something on your ego, I try working on it. Offcourse I thought about that part, and i need to explain that part. 
            
            Basically a reader said that Adam sounds like a cheater or two timer, I thought I explained his part well, but when I thought about her comment, I think so she's right and I need to make changes or clear that part, because  I don't want to portray any character negative, World have enough negativity. 
            So I will brain storm about that part. And I open to suggestions. You guys can suggest what more i could add to improve that hole.
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inaarahh

@Kookiminia  what was the plothole? and what I like about you is that most authors ignore when someone comments about it or just say that it's their book and they'd write however they want. I remember the first time I said u can't marry even after 4 month if ur pregnant as iddah prd doesn't end and u changed it. It was my first exprnc that an author takes readers comments seriously
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ENalways

Hi, omg, I love your book. I was just wondering if this book has ended or if there any more chapters. I really want more chapters, and especially a happy ending. tysm for this book. You're amazing. Aacha, please do let me know if there are more chapters and when they are available to read. Shukriya, tysm.

ENalways

@Kookiminia YESSS, TYSM. And no, you ain't crazy, you're literally so talented mashallah. TY TY TY. I COULD SCREAM IN HAPPINESS RN
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Kookiminia

@ENalways Thank you  so much for loving the story line and characters. It does have more chapters, probably till 60 or 70 something. Plus you got stuck with a lazy author. Stay patience till the end.
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Kookiminia

This is my first time writing a story. Reading others inspires me to write one too. But never thought it could be this difficult. When I started this story I didn't have a proper storyline in my mind, just a few scenarios. But then I thought if I am writing, I should make it based on topics in our society that are not enough discussed. So here I am. Big Thanks to all of you who appreciate my work.
           But last month my grandfather passed away. Due to which I was out of the city and wasn't able to give proper updates. That's why I don't rush my updates, in case I ruin the storyline. So the MAIN THING is....
          
          The story will be on hiatus till the end of the month. Some changes are required in the story. Will update you on the 5th of May, Inshallah.  Hope so you will cooperate. Meet you with some changes. And don't worry Nothing gonna change in Inayan's and Ayan's story.
          Author loves you bugs.

Kookiminia

@Kookiminia, thank you for your support
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inaarahh

@Kookiminia I'm a very picky reader I drop most stories in just 2 chapters but your story got me attracted at the starting I thought It's the same forced marriage story in every books but still I loved it when I started to read further it got interesting 
            Your doing well don't loss your motivation....I know it's not an easy task but overall its excellent 
            I'll be waiting for your story when you resume next month
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Kookiminia

Assalam u Alaikum, everyone. I have been reading your comments and I am grateful for your response. Thank you so much for loving Inaya and Ayan. Nothing can make a writer happier than her readers loving her characters. I will be happy if you guys love other characters the way you love main leads. Adam's story also has an important role. If he didn't leave that day because of being married to Ayesha. Then Inaya and Ayan would have never been together. But I will try to update you soon about our MAIN LEADS. Just one more chapter about second leads. Hope you guys won't mind. And I am open to suggestions. If you find something wrong you can tell freely in the comment section. Thanks. 
          Author loves you bugs.

inaarahh

@Kookiminia Thank you to you too...bcz when we say something most of the authors take that as hate and be rude on us
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Kookiminia

First of all, Thank you so much for responding. Secondly, I do have a situation, but after your comment, I asked my elders and confirmed some stuff. I will try to make changes to the story as soon as possible. Will change the mistake I made. Thank you so much for the correction. I totally understand your point. Right now I don't have that many readers so it's better to make a correction rather than spread the wrong stuff. I appreciate your criticism.
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inaarahh

@Kookiminia starting to love the second leads but the thing is you started their story randomly you could have started by giving a glimpse of their present life awy each author have their own style and I respect yours
            Also I mentioned this in comments....You could have not mentioned about Idhaa bcz if your mentioning it state the crct fact 
            A widow or divorcee have a period of four months and 10 days in idhha and if she is pregnant then it's till the birth of the child 
            I'm not being mean to you it's just english is my second language so my talking feels so rude and when we are stating things about our religion we should be careful
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