@CharisseEerie Pure Pressure is a dual POV, dialogue heavy romance book. I want to share the first 4 chapters of my book this week (except the intro).
i) The banter between Gigi and Dylan has to flow and feel natural. Is this goal achieved, is there any places you thought, why would they say that?
ii) One of the points I feel off about the first chapters is the scene with Colton (Chapter 3), I want to make sure Dylan’s reactions are accurate, if not how could I improve them? I’m open to ideas.
iii) Does Gigi in any way feel oblivious or out of touch? Is she unlikeable?
iv) Not mandatory but I’d love it if you picked a song for the vibe of the book.
Trigger Warnings: trauma, mature, eating disorder, assault, mental struggles