LaLunaBluemoon

I'm just starting out with my writing and If you have a spare 10 seconds I would really appreciate some feedback or comments about my story. 

Califia

Hey Elle~~Thanks for your vote on  "Crissa's Mate."  I'm sending you another of my reads that just might awakeen your darker fantasies: "Dominance factor." It's about a young woman who eagerly explores her fascination with a secret society and its BDSM role-playing parties (yeah, that).
          
          Enjoy my reads. (And feel free to message me anytime). 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/87854945-dominance-factor 
          
          ~~Califia