Hey, I'm an aspiring author, just starting out. I thought I'd throw some of the stuff I'm working on up here to see how people liked it. Get some feedback and try to improve my writing and hopefully one day get published.

This is a big step for me as I've been very shy about showing other people my work but I've managed to build up my courage, after all, you can never improve if you never show it to someone. 

So I hope people like it, and if not, I hope you'll give me some constructive feedback so I can try to improve.