Laurentiino

The struggle of trying to find a certain kind of story, doesn’t exist, and then having the urge to make a cover (and potential fanfic) for said story  

sunnybeiwb

@Laurentiino when will you update next chapter for   
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Laurentiino

The struggle of trying to find a certain kind of story, doesn’t exist, and then having the urge to make a cover (and potential fanfic) for said story  

sunnybeiwb

@Laurentiino when will you update next chapter for   
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Laurentiino

TAKING IDEAS NOW!!!!!!: I don't do this often but comment what stories you'd want to see in the future. Just as a reference I have 22 unpublished stories, all of them are posted on "My Story Ideas". Some of these are literally over a year old but I will EVENTUALLY get to them lmao. Got one about The Boys and Steven Universe, more dbz, mha, dxd, and invincible, along with remakes. I will move my Stranger Things one onto this account. What I want to do is make more short stories like "Path To Redemption", I liked making that one.

Aang456

@Laurentiino ok, I hope to see it soon
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Laurentiino

@Aang456 I actually have an unpublished story about that same idea. But it’s a sequel to star crkossd
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Aang456

@Laurentiino i got another idea. How about a saiyan viltrumite in dbz. Ive always seen one about invincible but never dragon ball. He could be the son of Nappa and he could be 16 years old. They tell him to go to Earth alongside Raditz because they think he's weak with a power level of 1700
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MichealArmstrong

In the Invincible universe, Ben Tennyson would likely transition from a "Saturday morning hero" to a high-stakes operative in a world where collateral damage is permanent and blood is frequently spilled. ## 1. The "Teen Team" or GDA Recruitment
          Given his power level, Ben would be an immediate person of interest for Cecil Stedman and the Global Defense Agency (GDA).
          
          * The Asset: Cecil would view the Omnitrix as the ultimate tactical Swiss Army knife. Ben would likely be recruited into the Teen Team (alongside Mark, Rex Splode, and Eve) or eventually the Guardians of the Globe.
          * The Conflict: Much like Mark Grayson, Ben would struggle with Cecil’s "ends justify the means" morality. Cecil would likely try to find a way to hack or replicate the Omnitrix for GDA soldiers.
           ## 2. Interaction with Viltrumites
          The most fascinating aspect would be how the Omnitrix reacts to Viltrumites.
          
          * The DNA Sample: If Ben encountered Nolan (Omni-Man) or Mark, the Omnitrix would likely sample Viltrumite DNA. Ben would gain a "Prime Viltrumite" form—essentially his own version of Omni-Man.
          * The Power Gap: While Ben has powerhouses like Way Big or Alien X, most of his standard roster (Four Arms, Diamondhead) would be significantly weaker than an average Viltrumite. He would have to rely on versatility and hax abilities (like Ghostfreak or Clockwork) rather than brute force.
           ## 3. Tone and Stakes
          The Invincible universe is famously brutal.
          
          * Physicality: Ben’s aliens would take real damage. We might see a version of Diamondhead shattered or a Four Arms losing limbs—injuries that would carry over or cause massive trauma when he reverts to human form.
          * The Secret Identity: Unlike the later seasons of Ben 10, where his identity is public, Ben would likely have to keep a mask on to protect Max and Gwen from the various galactic threats and assassins that populate Image Comics’ Earth.
          
          

MichealArmstrong

Take a look at the power gap and physicality and think it through, deeply 
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MichealArmstrong

@Laurentiino made up I could say the same as yours a made up scenario in which you think Ben 10 can defeat Omni-man without any difficulty 
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Laurentiino

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@MichealArmstrong This aint proof of shit. It just made up a scenario.
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Laurentiino

New updates will be coming out once I get my laptop to actually work with my hotspot 

MichealArmstrong

But I was wondering if you would be willing to read my own work as well 
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