@Leiana2213
So, first things first, I came across your profile on the WP fantasy account, along with your request for feedback on Alys.
So, I would say the summary needs some revising. In its current state, the synopsis looks cliché and doesn't offer any context as to what a reader should expect when starting to read the book. The arrival of war is rather common in fantasy, thus elaborate to show the distinction between your work and that of others.
Hello my lovely followers, readers, and supporters. Im sorry I havent had much progress with book 2 of my Alamer books. I recently had surgery on the 19th, and now in the start of my recovery stage. I’ll try to work on my book, and thank you all for being patient! Love you all!
I have done it! I have finished the first draft of Alys! It will be undergoing some edits while I start work on the draft to next book in the series to be released here on Wattpad!
Finally added Chapter 20 to my book Alys.
Finally added Chapter 20 to my book Alys.
Finally posted a new chapter to Alys. Sorry it took so long.
Finally posted a new chapter to Alys. Sorry it took so long.
Due to some issues (mainly time), my story Sky Child has been temporarily unplublished by me. I think once I've settled on a pace for my main project (the Alamer series) I'll rerelease Sky Child. Currently Alys is rather sporadic in uploads and chapter completion.
Started a new story called Sky Child. Title is probably temporary.