LethargicActionHero

Updated "Good Sport" Chapter 6 as well. Happy New Year!

LethargicActionHero

Added a couple new illustrations to chapters 1 and 2 of "Turn, Turn, Turn"! Go check them out!

LethargicActionHero

@Bbbbbaaaa1234567890 Thank you so much! I've already begun writing a sequel, but my main focus for the time being is getting WH polished up enough to get printed some day. That's gonna take a while...
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Bbbbbaaaa1234567890

@LethargicActionHero good luck getting wh published. I’m really hoping you do write a sequel. I’m emotionally committed :)
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kcgalloway

WAIT. WEREWOLFS HUMANITY IS COMPLETED???? That just means that part is done, right? There’s still more? Maybe? *nervously bites nails* ;)
          
          In all seriousness, thank you for writing such a spectacular tale. It was a rough day for me and pausing to read your story really took the edge off the worst of it. Your characters are stellar and your world compelling. I mean, you just cover so much! I’ve watched Sammy grow up! 
          
          So I’m pretty invested. ;) keep it up!!

LethargicActionHero

@kcgalloway Do you have Discord? If so I'll DM you my username and we'll work out the details!
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kcgalloway

@LethargicActionHero 
            Sure! You’d need to let me know what sort of comments you want and I’m down 
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PartlyLady

I just finished your story Werewolf’s Humanity and I really enjoyed it. I’m sorry that I’m not generally given to commenting on a story until the end. I don’t like being taken out of the story in order to make a comment, but I know to an author even a simple “liked it” would be good. I’m gonna hafta start doing that.
          
          I really liked Sammy. I was touched by his self deprecating view of himself. Humility in a male so extra large is very likeable. I also liked that Sammy was just a regular dude, nothing really special about him except his optimism and hope, and his strong unshakable faith. You made a very ordinary Sammy and extraordinary hero due in large parts to those traits and how they both framed his thoughts and informed his choices. 
          
          I liked how you kept all his relationships relatively realistic. Some good elements to the relationships, some bad, some changing, some constant, but always evolving just like real life.
          
          I was curious that the other boy in the BioPharm lab was never mentioned until he came back to the story in a big way. I felt like Sammy would have asked more about him, wondered about him. I know in the beginning Sammy would never do that, but I felt like he might have been very interested in reaching out the Benny because coping with their shared traumatic teen years would have helped them both.
          
          I liked how this story felt almost like a series of captured moments in Sammy’s life. I liked the back and forth dialogue between Sammy and Donnie. When Sammy first met Reilly, his desperate desire to make a friend and the disastrous reaction he got, totally broke my heart.
          
          These are some of the comments I should have left along the way, but my desire to keep reading over road my thoughts to leave comments. Also, I never remember to hit that star button. Your story will certainly go on my recommendation list.
          
          Lastly, I totally LOVE your user name. Lethargic Action Hero....so freakin funny!

PartlyLady

Done. Hope it helps you get more exposure.
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LethargicActionHero

@PartlyLady Thank you so much for your kind words and enthusiastic input! I'm striving to depict realism in my characters, despite the fantastical elements in their natures. As for Benny... after their rescue, they both had so much else on their plates, and they just reminded each other of the trauma of what they went through... while they didn't out-and-out state it, they both drifted away from each other on purpose. I thought I had implied that in their conversation, but maybe I need to make it more explicit in the next revisions.
            
            And hey, if you'd really like to help out, you could always go back and hit that star button on a few of your favorite chapters, it would really help bump this story up on the site's algorithms and help me get more exposure!
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LethargicActionHero

Hello everyone! While I want to thank those of you who have been actively following WH and being generous with your upvotes... I'm going through a bit of an emotional slump right now, this pandemic has stalled my job hunting and let's just say it's taking its emotional toll. If anyone could take the time to leave some comments and feedback on my stories, those always brighten my day. I haven't gotten any comments here on Wattpad for the past 33 chapters, and I really enjoy knowing what kind of thoughts and emotions my stories give to readers. Thank you in advance!

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@WittleBird Thank you! It's just nice to know more specifically what I'm doing well and what I'm doing not so well, sometimes.
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WittleBird

@LethargicActionHero your stories are absolutely wonderful! Don't be too hard on yourself, 
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