LisaSmalleyNeuberger

@KatPruitt Thanks for the read. I'll try to do yours tonight after the kids go to sleep.

KatPruit

Hi! I was hoping you could critique my story "The Monster Wihin". It only has a prologue, but I would love if you critiqued it! I would like if you could critique the summary too (but I don't mind if you dont.)
          Thanks, I'm going to read your story now. :)