abdefense

Helloooo~~~~
          First of all this book is amazing 
          Like really nice...
          Like I really like how our little wei ying ,hides his loneliness by his obsession towards our demon king and how our lovely demon king is regretting his life choice but still falling for our little bunny head disciple...
          But... I would like to suggest...maybe you all can think about it...
          Like maybe you can add like a few chapters or little information regarding lan wangjis and lan qirens past...
          I don't know if you all are planning to add it or not  but maybe you can add it in the beginning or maybe in the upcoming chapters...for it will give readers more understanding and maybe even get them more interested in your book...
          
          Anyway I am really looking forward to more updates...please do not keep us waiting for long

Sodiqq89

I recently came across your story on Wattpad and I’ve been reading a few chapters. I just wanted to say your story is really impressive and engaging. You have a great writing style and interesting ideas.
          I’m a beta reader and book editor, and I help writers improve their stories by providing constructive feedback on things like plot, pacing, characters, and overall readability.
          If you ever need a beta reader to review your chapters or your full book, I’d be happy to help and support your writing journey.
          Feel free to message me anytime if you're interested. I’d love to work with you! 
          If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
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