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It's baaaaack! Here's another snippet from Logon's Adventures!
          	       Eamon laughs. "Let's rooooollllllll!" He peels out of the ditch, driving straight toward an oncoming building.
          	
          	        "Eamon!" I shout. "That's a building!"
          	
          	        He just cackles and drives straight through it.
          	
          	        The stone wall crumbles as we blow through the empty building and out the other side, right into another structure. Gripping the seat as tightly as possible, I look over to Ryoku only to find him missing. My head snaps back, searching for him. I see him tumbling on the ground behind us.
          	
          	        "Ryoku!" I call, "Eamon! You just launched him out the back!"
          	
          	        As I turn to scold him, a set of wooden spoons flies through the front and smacks me in the face, causing my head to jerk back. I duck down to avoid any more flying objects. A crack rings out as a couch collides with the front of the frame and bounces off the car. Oh my Ki-rin, I'm going to die here. We blow through building after building, leaving a trail of wreckage in our wake.
          	
          	        Finally, we crash through a wall into the town square. Slamming on the brakes, we screech to a halt, and Eamon flies out the front. He tumbles across the stone floor and into the pit.
          	
          	        My eyes widen. "Eamon!" Throwing the door open, I rush out and peer over the side of the pit. "Are you okay!?"
          	
          	        Eamon lies splayed on his back, laughing. He gives me a thumbs-up from the ground below.

Lizis16

It's baaaaack! Here's another snippet from Logon's Adventures!
                 Eamon laughs. "Let's rooooollllllll!" He peels out of the ditch, driving straight toward an oncoming building.
          
                  "Eamon!" I shout. "That's a building!"
          
                  He just cackles and drives straight through it.
          
                  The stone wall crumbles as we blow through the empty building and out the other side, right into another structure. Gripping the seat as tightly as possible, I look over to Ryoku only to find him missing. My head snaps back, searching for him. I see him tumbling on the ground behind us.
          
                  "Ryoku!" I call, "Eamon! You just launched him out the back!"
          
                  As I turn to scold him, a set of wooden spoons flies through the front and smacks me in the face, causing my head to jerk back. I duck down to avoid any more flying objects. A crack rings out as a couch collides with the front of the frame and bounces off the car. Oh my Ki-rin, I'm going to die here. We blow through building after building, leaving a trail of wreckage in our wake.
          
                  Finally, we crash through a wall into the town square. Slamming on the brakes, we screech to a halt, and Eamon flies out the front. He tumbles across the stone floor and into the pit.
          
                  My eyes widen. "Eamon!" Throwing the door open, I rush out and peer over the side of the pit. "Are you okay!?"
          
                  Eamon lies splayed on his back, laughing. He gives me a thumbs-up from the ground below.

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Funnily enough, half of Logon's inner monologue is him judging other people and what they're doing. Like, he may be quiet, but that man is hardcore judging you. He listens and he judges. The people around him are idiots, and he will tell them that.

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It's done! The new and improved version of https://www.wattpad.com/story/317835514-blood-moon-lake?utm_source=web&utm_medium=email&utm_content=share_myworks is up! The biggest change is the fact that it went from almost 50 chapters to 24. The old pacing was atrocious, I tell you, atrocious. I hope you enjoy it!
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          Now for the promised RE update. Well, to put it bluntly, it's not happening. The story was fighting me the whole way, and back in August, I finally figured out why. There is no reason for my characters other than they just happen to be victims in the plot. This problem starts in Blood Moon Lake and makes it impossible to continue the series. So, it is on hold. I'm leaving it alone for a while because there's other stuff I'd like to work on, and BLM has already taken five years of my time. I do apologize for not delivering what I promised, but this is how it's gotta be.

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My editor is way busy, so I decided to finish the edits myself. I have four chapters left to read through, so expect the updated version of BML early next week at the latest! I'll make another post when it's up and give you a RE update with it 

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Snippet from the latest chapter. Am I behind? Yes. Do I fully intend to make it up. Also, yes. Just have to deal with my Ethics class's tomfoolery first.
          I grab Leo’s wrist and pull him closer. “You hear that?”
          “I don’t hear shit,” he hisses.
          I nod. “Exactly, keep walking, stay close, and act normal.”
          Leo squeezes my hand and starts walking again. I keep pace with him. Our hands stay locked together just in case. You never know when you have to take off running and there is no way I’m leaving him behind.

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Don't worry, I am working on it! Edits on BML are taking longer than planned but it'll be out soon.
          I glance around the bustling sidewalk. One of these people has to know which way to go.
          People shove past us, rushing to wherever they’re trying to go. Lots have earbuds shoved in their ears or have their eyes glued to their phones. I try to get the attention of several of them, but none bother to look up.
          I frown. Okay, so this might be harder than I thought. Walking up behind someone, I tap their shoulder. The person glares at me and keeps walking. Rude. I try again, tapping someone else.
          She pulls her earbud out. “What?”
          “You wouldn’t happen to know how to get to the library from here, would you?” I ask.
          She shakes her head and continues on.
          Load of help she was.
          My next few attempts are just as unsuccessful. Some people ignore me while others look at me like I’m stupid. A few shake their heads or tell me no.
          “Don’t you have a phone?” the guy I just asked asks me.
          I sigh. “Yes, but it’s dead.”
          He snorts. “Sounds like a you problem.”
          I scoff as he walks away. Seriously? What a jerk.
          “Any luck?” Leo asks.
          I turn and shake my head. “You?”
          “No,” he replies. “We aren't getting anywhere.”
          I nod. “You can say that again.”
          “Let’s change tactics,” he suggests.
          I raise an eyebrow. “How?”
          He waves me off. “Don’t worry about it. I’ve got it.”
          Before I can protest, he starts walking in the opposite direction of the crowd. I shove after him. He doesn’t make it far before bumping into someone, sending them sprawling to the ground.
          “Sorry,” bending down, he picks up their open phone and starts typing away.
          “Hey!” they shout. “Give that back!”
          “Yeah, yeah,” he replies, “One second.”
          “Leo!” I scold, rushing over. “Give that back!”
          “Library is a twenty-minute walk from here,” he says, passing the phone back to its owner. “Come on.”
          The person opened their mouth to yell, but Leo was already gone.

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Here's a scene from the new improved BML along with an update! I only have 8 chapters left to edit so I'll be done by my deadline!
          Sprinting down the hall, I threw open the closet door and shoved Ella inside. Filing in after her, I saw Leo wasn’t behind me. Where is he!? A few moments later, he skidded in dashing toward the closet.
          “What were you doing?!” I hissed.
          He held up a kitchen knife. “Grabbing a weapon.”
          Squeezing in next to me, he pulled the door shut. He crouched down, knife in hand looking ready to strike at any moment.
          “What’s going on?” Jack whispered.
          “Yeah,” Anna said, “Why are we hiding in a closet?”
          “And what’s with the screaming?” Ella asked.
          “Great questions,” I looked at the blonde, “Wanna answer them.”
          “There are people dressed in black body suits and freaky masks killing people with large butcher knives,” Leo answered, “Closets are great for surprise attacks and no way for people to get you from behind. No idea what’s going on with the screaming.”
          An awkward silence settled over the group. I didn’t know what to do. Some strange person appeared covered in blood and had murderers chasing him. Now we’re crammed in the closet waiting for them to what? Break it and attack us? Leave us alone? Should we have called the cops? The screams should have attracted the other visitor’s attention, right?
          We huddled there in silence waiting for something to happen. Nothing did.
          Someone slammed into the front door.
          I sucked in a breath.
          They rammed into the door again.
          And again.
          And again. 
          A loud crack followed by shattering glass rang through the cabin. 
          Another slam was followed by a deafening boom as the wood door finally gave way.