Hello! So i have a basic plot for the book im working on. Comment any ideas you may have, please.
Our main character, Nari had a childhood with extremely high standards. Her only friend was her twin brother, because their parents kept them secluded. Later Nari’s brother hot sent away to boarding school. Her parents tricked her and told her it was because he wasn’t smart enough. This led to Nari having very high standards for herself.
Forward some years into adulthood
Nari now runs her parents company, she deals with all her competitors and the company constantly climbs the ladder.
Sadly, she dies. She is met with the devil, and she makes a deal. She ask for him to give her two weeks max until she dies, he agrees and says he would cash in his favor later.
She dies once more. She is now in hell, and with all her business experience, starts to run a small casino after a few months. The devil visits her and says he’s ready to cash in his favor.
She must pretend to be his wife for a month. She agrees, and then the month begins. She goes to business meetings and a lot of other things concerning earth. Until one day, she hears him talking about her brother, she says nothing about it due to her wanting to get more information.
The month goes on and her and the devil start to catch feelings. By the time that the month is over, she decides to stay with him.
Some time after they are together for real. Her brother ends up in hell. Ready to reveal the truth about where he went.