Hey, I noticed you asking for a read on someone else's profile and I'm wondering if you'd like to join a book club? It's a fantastic way to get reads and comments as well as getting to know new people.
Dreamland Community is an amazing one that offers a range of activities and groups (each with their own deadlines so you can tailor it to your needs). You can get feedback, reviews and even covers for your books. It's well organised and everyone in it is polite and we want to help each other improve.
https://www.wattpad.com/user/DreamlandCommunity
They also have a discord server.