LorenzoFerrari2002

Well... It's my birthday again...
          	
          	Now I'm officially 23

LorenzoFerrari2002

Well... It's my birthday again...
          
          Now I'm officially 23

Raival904

Hey Lorenzo, how are you dude? Sorry my updates are slow but I made an announcement recently

LorenzoFerrari2002

@Raival904 
            Friendship Request should have arrived
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Raival904

@LorenzoFerrari2002  Rayvaul but sometimes I go by FieryRay
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Raival904

@LorenzoFerrari2002  I was think about that actually at one point. But if you want to do it privately we can, and good idea.  
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jonesman1096

Recently, I've been feeling like my Oscar story's recent chapter could use some edits. Do you think there could be any changes?

jonesman1096

Thank you, I was just curious. To me, it seemed like a few parts, like the final battle, could use a bit more detail, but to me, there were a few spelling errors, which I just fixed.
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            I just finished the last chapter.
            
            I don't see parts that need to be improved, honestly
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            I'm currently rereading the story. I'll let you know once I'll reach the chapter
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jonesman1096

Curious on your opinion for my Oscar Pine story, do you think I should start the next chapter with sirius and qrow investigating the Dursley‘s or just go to the aftermath of the dragon challenge?

LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            That merges both things without looking like it's in blocks, but instead a more fluid story
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            Both are good ideas...
            
            I'd like to start with the immediate consequences of the dragon (the first two hours or so)... Then Qrow and Sirius investingating the Dursley and then returning to the actual investigation after the first task
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MihoNishizumi69

So, what do you think of Remnants Of The Past so far?

LorenzoFerrari2002

@MihoNishizumi69 
          Here's Miho's own file:
          
          Name: Miho Maria
          
          Last Name: Nishizumi-Rommel
          
          Date and place of birth: October 23 1925
          
          Gender: Female
          
          Witch?: Yes
          
          Familiar: Fox
          
          Magical Ability: Area Scan (she's basically a living radar capable of detecting everything in a 5 miles radius), Preflexes (improved reflexes and instinct) and Mega Strenght (you won't want to receive a punch or a slap from her)
          
          Enlisted?: Yes
          
          Branch: K.K.E. (Karlslander Kaiserliche Elite, or Karlsland Imperial Elite)
          
          Unit: 1° Joint Panzer Battalion (also known as Ooarai Battalion)
          
          Background:
          Born as the youngest daughter of Shiho Ingrid Rommel and Tsuneo Nishizumi in Ulm
          
          Raised as a Prussian Woman with strong loyalty to the Kaiser and a deep hate towards Nazis (that are dubbed Terrorists in this story)
          
          Her life met a turning point after a School Shooting in which she gathered reinforcement for the defenders, making her more hot tempered and almost ruthless against the enemy
          
          In 1936 she volunteered to fight in the Hispanian Defense, becoming in 1939, at the age of 14, the youngest Witch General until the arrival of Dasha Dayan 30 years later.
          
          She fought in the Neuroi War 2, participating in many key battles, including Operation Bifrost (the evacuation of Karlsland), El Alamein, Kursk, Overlord, Marked Garden, Bastogne and Berlin
          
          After the war she was involved in the Gate War, causing great damages to Sadera and its allies.
          
          Personality:
          Really easy to piss off, especially if you bring up Nazis. Extremely paranoid of everyone outside her unit, that she treats like her family. Grumpy at first, but, after you know her, really intelligent and sarcastic.
          
          She's also extremely acculturated and a bookworm, other than a makeshift inventor and mechanic...
          
          Weapon of choice: MP-40, Luger P-08, her own fists (her actual favourites)
          
          Striker Unit: She has a Panzer IV tank
          
          Peculiar traits: Black eyepatch on the right eye (sniper wound got in Okinawa on July 7 1945). SHE HATES NAZIS.

LorenzoFerrari2002

@MihoNishizumi69 
          Maybe another time, when I'll have the first story completed...
          
          Oh, before I forgot, if you want to have an OC that will appear in my Strike Witches story, here's the carachter sheet I use for the files for my story:
          
          Name:
          
          Last Name:
          
          Date and place of birth: (must be in a Earth Nation and in a date between January 1 1880 and December 31 1948)
          
          Gender:
          
          Witch? (only females): (Yes or No)
          
          Familiar (only Witches):
          
          Magical Ability (only Witches): (maximum 3, most common only one)
          
          Enlisted?: (Yes or No)
          
          Branch (if enlisted): 
          
          Unit (if enlisted):
          
          Background:
          
          Personality:
          
          Weapon of choice (if enlisted):
          
          Striker Unit (Only Witches):
          
          Peculiar traits (alergies, medical conditions ecc...):
          
          You can use this sheet to send me the informations for your carachter if you want him/her to appear in the story (don't send Miho Nishizumi, I already have her file created, if you want I can show it to you along with a more detailed "basic biography" of her)