LorenzoFerrari2002

Well... It's my birthday again...
          	
          	Now I'm officially 23

MihoNishizumi69

have you read my new story?

MihoNishizumi69

@LorenzoFerrari2002 I will continue those at some point but I need something I can potentially market on the duture
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MihoNishizumi69

@LorenzoFerrari2002 thanks, for my first book using my own idea, it's gotten some positive feedback. Although it seems like fanfiction gains more traction.
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jonesman1096

Thinking about the next chapter, which is going to open with a news article from Rita Skeeter. Do you have any examples of how it would go?

LorenzoFerrari2002

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@jonesman1096 
            Skeeter is someone who uses diffamation for profits...
            
            She'll always try to have the most sensational news possible. Even if it's utter Bullshit
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jonesman1096

I'm curious about your opinion on my Oscar Pine story. Do you think I should make Hermione a faunus? I've already established that, aside from Jacob contacting his dad and godfather for the main events, everything else follows canon. So, it's possible that Hermione could have taken the tainted Polyjuice potion.

jonesman1096

Thinking about the next chapter, which is going to open with a news article from Rita Skeeter. Do you have any examples of how it would go?
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            Possible...
            
            Afterall, this happened in another Fanfic...
            
            Maybe she was a Faunus since the incident...
            
            We could do that Mrs Pomfrey managed to eliminate all the fur and most of the rest but the ears somehow stayed and she had to hide them with charms... At least until now
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LorenzoFerrari2002

Well... It's my birthday again...
          
          Now I'm officially 23

Raival904

Hey Lorenzo, how are you dude? Sorry my updates are slow but I made an announcement recently

LorenzoFerrari2002

@Raival904 
            Friendship Request should have arrived
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Raival904

@LorenzoFerrari2002  Rayvaul but sometimes I go by FieryRay
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Raival904

@LorenzoFerrari2002  I was think about that actually at one point. But if you want to do it privately we can, and good idea.  
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jonesman1096

Recently, I've been feeling like my Oscar story's recent chapter could use some edits. Do you think there could be any changes?

jonesman1096

Thank you, I was just curious. To me, it seemed like a few parts, like the final battle, could use a bit more detail, but to me, there were a few spelling errors, which I just fixed.
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            I just finished the last chapter.
            
            I don't see parts that need to be improved, honestly
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LorenzoFerrari2002

@jonesman1096 
            I'm currently rereading the story. I'll let you know once I'll reach the chapter
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