Love1D_Brooke_Ali

@Brunetteloves1D It's fine. You're just finding errors(: THANKS FOR READING!
          	-Brooke xx

buswriters98

Hi!! I was wondering if you have time could you check out my new stories Falling and Three More Months? If you like them please comment and vote! I don't mean to spam your page I just want to get the word out about my story! :) ~ Ally

Brunetteloves1D

Thanks, I don't wanna seemlike I'm intruding on your fic. I'm just saying this for future reference, no judgement at all. Um, I'm actually currently reaing it and i stumbled upon it in chapter two, but as I'm not done with what's written so far, I don't know if there's more. 

Brunetteloves1D

Hi! Sorry to bother you. I've recently started reading your fanfic and I love it! Just one thing though. I can tell that Brooke is "Cordiela" and Ali is "Sapphire". See, in some chapters, you accidentally include te name Brooke instead of the characters. So it was a bit confusing at first, but I figured it out. I think you're doing a great job with this fic, it's just that it's a bit confusing when I see those names in there. Just wanted to let you know. Anyways, LOVE this story!:)