LovePlayz
Thank you so much for the criticism it means a lot! I love constructive critique and it didn’t offend me in anyway! I love how you didn’t sugarcoat anything and told me exactly what you didn’t like any loved! I will definitely check out your acc and aBookaWeek. I just wanted to say that this is the first chapter so it can be a little tricky and confusing but the next chapter will clear up a lot of miss understandings. By the end of the story her character development changes drastically and she sees people in a different light instead of peasants. I hope you keep reading to find out more! <3