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Hi So I just wanted to say that your book The Mafia's Princess is confusing the shit out of me Since I'm a new reader I have no idea what is happening in chapter 4 because in the chapter before that Siren is kidnapped beaten wears baggy clothes and doesn't eat How can she change so much in one night Now ( in the chapters after 'unfixable' or after 'chapter 4') she wears skinnies shirts make up she eats and she acts like she has known Logan Hera and Julian all her life I'm just really confused and I think it's because (this is a question) are you editing your book from the start and changing the plot cuz if so I will put your book on hold just until you finish editing so I can read it without getting confused Please reply to clear my confusion