I have a few things to say :P
First, I am so so so so sorry for not critiquing lately! I'll try my best.
Secondly, I apologize for not really focusing on Lost in Wonderland, I've been working on a lot of other things lately.
Lastly, If you thought your email sending you a second email about chapter two was a glitch, it wasn't! I rewrote the whole chapter. So if it doesn't make sense, that's why.
Thanks!