Lucian Ward

@sagnik01saha    Thank you so much.   I'm really glad you’re enjoying it.
            
            I would love to know, what’s been your favorite aspect of the story so far?  The Kael/Sari dynamic, the worldbuilding, the social structure on Lysena, Lina and Risa’s arcs…?
            
            It’s always interesting seeing what aspects of the story readers connect to most.

@X2x1x2X     That’s actually really helpful feedback because those scenes are some of my favorites to write too. The tension and chemistry between them is basically the heart of the story.
            
            If you enjoy the Kael and Sari interactions, I think you’ll probably like where the rest of the story goes.
            
            And honestly, one of the reasons I started building Lysena as a larger setting is because I realized I wanted to keep exploring different relationships and dynamics inside this world beyond just this one story.

@X2x1x2X I really love the scenes of ml and fl being together. Them doing that project together was the best scene so far. And I would really love if you could increase their number of interactions.
            Rest I love your stories 

Thank you  Really glad the storyline and character chemistry are working for you. Those are probably the two things I’ve spent the most time trying to balance.
            
            Out of curiosity, what’s been your favorite part of the story so far? And is there anything you’d want more (or less) of as things keep unfolding?
            
            It’s always interesting seeing what different readers connect to.

Probably about 2/3 of the way through at this point.
            The story’s moving into some of the most important parts for the characters now.

@Anja_Iricia_Tiffany     Thank you so much. That really made my day 
            
            One of the things I wanted most with Under a Matra Sky was for Lysena to feel like a real society and not just some extreme dystopia or perfect utopia. Most matriarchal stories I’ve come across tend to go very far in one direction or the other, and I wanted Lysena to feel more grounded and lived-in than that.
            
            So I’m really glad the worldbuilding has been landing for you alongside the story itself.
            
            And honestly, hearing that it made your top 10 means a lot!

@ysarlak19    Thanks mate, I really appreciate that.
            
            And honestly, that’s good advice. Posting consistently for months while writing the story at the same time can definitely become a lot sometimes.  Lucky for me it has been a labor of love. 
            
            Really glad you’ve been enjoying the story so far.

Thanks for your message. I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Can I ask how you found out about it?
            
            I have several more chapters of Under a Matra Sky written and will be posting them over the next few weeks, and I am continuing to work on it. I’m also working on another, shorter story that also takes place on Lysena and involves a displaced young man who has to learn how to navigate life in a strictly matriarchal society. 

@vesper_  Thank you so much, I’m glad you are enjoying it! I’m posting new chapters of Under a Matra Sky twice a week. This story is part of a larger universe I’m building called the Lysena Chronicles, with several different stories planned, all set on the same world.