Your background scared me sh*tless omd X( I just finished reading the first part of your story! :) Overall, I think it's really well written. And out of all honesty, the plot sounds kind of far-fetched and fast to me, I don't know, maybe it's just me? #ConstructiveCriticism :) lol. Oh, the cover could also use some tweaking, I'd be happy to make you one if you want. xx