Luphotsoko5

martykate1

I see you liked "So I Married a Rockstar." You might like my book, "The Boy From the Band."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/199054846-the-boy-from-the-band
          
          •	Engaging Narrative Voice: The first-person perspective is intimate, confessional, and immediately draws the reader into the narrator's emotional world. Her vulnerability and internal conflict are palpable, making her a relatable protagonist.
          •	Compelling Central Conflict: The core tension between the narrator's deep, consuming love for Rick and the numerous, significant red flags (his existing family, substance abuse, emotional unavailability) is clearly established and creates inherent drama.
          •	Effective Premise and Hook: Opening at the memorial service provides immediate emotional weight and stakes. It frames the entire flashback as a reflection on a life-altering love that has now ended, giving the story a powerful sense of consequence from the beginning.

Elusahsia

@LuzukoTsoko6 Hey,
          
          Not sure if you meant a book with all elements you mentioned, or whether you are cool with a book with one of those elements, but here are some with all three elements, in order of most recommended to least:
          
          The Mafia vampire's daddy lover 
          Falling in love with slavery
          I am woman
          
          Let me know if you are cool with books with only one of those elements
          
          Looking forward to your feedback!

Elusahsia

Hey,
          
          I would love a review. I have multiple genres you could choose from. Kindly let me know your preference and if I could send them over. Thanks!

Luphotsoko5

@Elusahsia but it's OK I will read them and give you a feedback 
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Luphotsoko5

@Elusahsia oh I meant the genres that I wrote 
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Amaarmya

Hey can I ask you something...?

Amaarmya

Oh okay that helped... 
            Thankyou so much ☺️
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Luphotsoko5

The app is good
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