Majid S. El Sawi

Hey everybody! Im sorry for the long delay for the next chapter. I just want to let you know that it is in the working. BUT! I re-wrote chapter 1. Go ahead and give it a read, their are some major changes. Enjoy :D
          Dawn Comes

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooh.  You changed the cover.  It's nice!

Helloooo, fellow Kasteans! Good news! I created a Wikia page for the Roses & Spiders Lore. It's not complete, so don't be too harsh on it. You will find the map of Kastea there, the emblems and special trivia! I hope you enjoy it. Here's the link:
          http://roses-spiders.wikia.com/wiki/Roses_%26_Spiders_Wikia
          May the night cloak you. :D

@itameio I gave it a read and it was quite good. Here were my findings that, if fixed, would turn your book into a professional one:
          Work on your grammar.
          Capitalize your I's and nouns.
          Work on environmental description. I noticed your reluctancy to describe the character but not the environment in which he/she is in. 
          Work a bit on the sense of time in the story. You will lose the reader when he does not have a clear grasp of what is happening now, what has happened before, and what will happen later.
          And your transition from one scene to another.
          
          Other than that, the idea is brilliant and here were my positive findings:
          Good character description 
          Interesting introduction
          Nice names too!
          Can not wait to see What you have in store for this book.

@itameio Of course! Interesting name too. I wil read ASAP, and tell you what I think. And while I'm at it, you can read my book and tell me what you think. Like this we can help each other out.

Hello, fellow Kasteans! I just wanted to inform u that "Kaste's Chaos: Summer" has been changed to "Roses & Spiders: Summer". You'll find some new things! Also, Chapter 5 is to be published in a few minutes. May the night cloak you...

I recommend reading chapter 2 before you read 4. It will give you a better grip and understanding.

Sorry for the wait guys. Just had some studies and all. But I definitely will continue with Summer real soon. Stay tuned...