Magpiethemagnificent

It’s a miracle!!!!!
          	
          	I actually updated!!!!!!!!
          	
          	https://my.w.tt/UiNb/EfgYc8J30I

thecatch1617

Hey @Magpiethemagnificent
          
          I am trying to get some editing suggestions on my story The Catch. I was really hoping that you could read the first chapter and either message me or post on my conversation board to tell me what you thought. If that's not something you'd want to do that's totally fine! I just want to know how I can improve the story to make it more enjoyable for the readers.
          
          Thanks!
          P.S. Your profile is really cool!
          
          ~thecatch1617

thecatch1617

Thank you so much!!! I appreciate it!!!
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Magpiethemagnificent

Thanks @thecatch1617
            
            I would be glad to help! After all we're all authors here. 
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Magpiethemagnificent

OH MY GODS ABOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!
          
          I just finished The First Adventure. Yep you read that right! I finished Th First flipping Adventure. 
          
          I don't know how to feel!!!! I'm both happy and sad!!!!! And I don't know which is more overwhelming. 
          
          This is the first novel like book I've finished on Wattpad. I feel so proud. But I couldn't do it without my fellow authors @jewellight11 @kytren and @carln292 !!!!
          
          I'll keep you guys posted for future Element Family posts!
          
          See you all later my peeps,
          —Magpie 

Magpiethemagnificent

Oh thank you ultimate sky goddess  
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