Your story "Love in Prison" really has the potential to become a strong, exciting and unique book. The story is excitingly different, and I especially love that you're writing from the POV of guys in the prison, not just from the main girl's point of view (which is, I must say, used too often in the books). Also, the first chapter was kind of shocking for me because I'm not used to reading strongly mature books, but I also think that, no matter how shocking and disturbing, that chapter provides a good plot builder for your story. Keep up the good work and I will surely stay tuned for more chapters :) ❤️
p.s. I hope Taylor steals Damien's cruel heart :)