@hibird27 Hello there :) Thank you for sticking around! The story retains the original premise, but the chapters are much longer, more fleshed out with more vivid descriptions, and additional lines for characters. I have also added images that show the closest visual representation of the characters and scenes the way I imagined them. Not perfectly captured but it's close. Hehe I am still struggling with my schedule so I cannot continuously write yet. Classes have started so I can only do light reading here while I do a line or two in my drafts for the next chapter. T___T