Mangopudding333

Hey fellow night owls, story stalkers, and Wattpad wonders! 
          	
          	I’m Mangopudding (because clearly I panic-picked my username like it was a snack choice) and I’m finally posting a story I’ve been obsessing over, crying about, rewriting at 3 AM, and romantically side-eyeing for weeks. 
          	
          	It’s called: Love At First Strike. 
          	Yes, there’s violence.
          	Yes, there is sarcasm.
          	Yes, someone may or may not get body slammed in a public park and fall in love afterward. (It’s fine. Therapy is expensive.)
          	
          	What to expect: 
          	A lot of “What the hell did I just read?” followed by “Wait no I love this.”
          	
          	If you like: 
          	Enemies(ish)-to-lovers.
          	Dangerous boys who secretly care too much.
          	Badass girls who throw punches before asking questions.
          	Boys who brood like it’s their job.
          	Then hi. Hello. Stay a while. Bring snacks. This might be your thing.
          	
          	Chapters are on the way! I’d love to know what you think. I’m always open to feedback, ideas, or just screaming together over fictional characters. 
          	
          	Read it. Love it. Roast it. Just know—once you’re in the Mango Mafia, there’s no going back.

Swanangel15

@Mangopudding333 no problem! I'm also wondering how you found me on wattpad and why you followed me. I send a message asking you that on your page
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Mangopudding333

@Swanangel15 
          	  Totally hear you, and I appreciate the feedback! I know the “I’m not like other girls” and anti-girly tropes can get so overused and sometimes harmful—I’m definitely not trying to get there intentionally. This is my very first book, and I just wanted to start with something light, chaotic, and fun, while I get the hang of storytelling. That said, I really want to grow as a writer, and I’ll keep your note in mind for future stories. Thanks again for taking the time to share it with me! 
          	  
          	  Sending thanks and virtual mango pudding your way!
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Swanangel15

@Mangopudding333 please do not add the I'm not like other girls cliche or potray girly girls as evil, shallow or airheaded
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Swanangel15

Hello! Thanks for following me! Please reply these questions:
          1. Why did you follow me?
          2. Can you please read and comment on my stories? (Note: one of them has 49 chapters so skip the prologue if it's too long. )

Swanangel15

Thank you so much!
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Mangopudding333

Hey hey!
            To answer your first question: I followed you after I saw your mention in a writing contest! Your name caught my eye, and I was curious to see what your stories were about. 
            As far as Reading and commenting: I’ll definitely try to check them out soon (49 chapters wow, go you!) I’ll skip the prologue if it helps, and let you know what I think when I get the chance. Looking forward to diving in!
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Mangopudding333

Hey fellow night owls, story stalkers, and Wattpad wonders! 
          
          I’m Mangopudding (because clearly I panic-picked my username like it was a snack choice) and I’m finally posting a story I’ve been obsessing over, crying about, rewriting at 3 AM, and romantically side-eyeing for weeks. 
          
          It’s called: Love At First Strike. 
          Yes, there’s violence.
          Yes, there is sarcasm.
          Yes, someone may or may not get body slammed in a public park and fall in love afterward. (It’s fine. Therapy is expensive.)
          
          What to expect: 
          A lot of “What the hell did I just read?” followed by “Wait no I love this.”
          
          If you like: 
          Enemies(ish)-to-lovers.
          Dangerous boys who secretly care too much.
          Badass girls who throw punches before asking questions.
          Boys who brood like it’s their job.
          Then hi. Hello. Stay a while. Bring snacks. This might be your thing.
          
          Chapters are on the way! I’d love to know what you think. I’m always open to feedback, ideas, or just screaming together over fictional characters. 
          
          Read it. Love it. Roast it. Just know—once you’re in the Mango Mafia, there’s no going back.

Swanangel15

@Mangopudding333 no problem! I'm also wondering how you found me on wattpad and why you followed me. I send a message asking you that on your page
• Reply

Mangopudding333

@Swanangel15 
            Totally hear you, and I appreciate the feedback! I know the “I’m not like other girls” and anti-girly tropes can get so overused and sometimes harmful—I’m definitely not trying to get there intentionally. This is my very first book, and I just wanted to start with something light, chaotic, and fun, while I get the hang of storytelling. That said, I really want to grow as a writer, and I’ll keep your note in mind for future stories. Thanks again for taking the time to share it with me! 
            
            Sending thanks and virtual mango pudding your way!
• Reply

Swanangel15

@Mangopudding333 please do not add the I'm not like other girls cliche or potray girly girls as evil, shallow or airheaded
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