Manovelda12

I'm writing my first story may you please check it out. 
          I just published "Chapter 3" of my story "Her Saviours ". https://www.wattpad.com/1436076582?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Manovelda12

This is my first novel to post.I would really appreciate some comments and motivation.
          I just published "Where am I ?" of my story "Her obsession ". https://www.wattpad.com/1322096033?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Madazainga12&wp_originator=f0%2Fd%2FUgwSma153EhlMu4Y04D4Syv7lYupgbvn2EeqmzBQ7VlkEKimq8FtqjIFRc4wzPOiLjXFMKp6nLr8o%2FZnDffdCBFpBMWbZmdIzZj3V1bBiY%2FzK0ocTIPSVlZzDug