I am a sophomore in high school and I have always wanted to read or watch something that was not out there and so I started by writing this book and I don't think that I am a very good writer but I would would very much appreciate it if you could read my story and comment on what you like and what you don't, and how you would like me to change it slightly if needed, so please comment I really want feed back on it and to k ow how well I am doing as a writer.