@MasqueradeDungeon Please continue. I love your writing. You have not uploaded in forever though. But here is my two cents if you want it. In the end it is not our decision if you decide to continue or not. It has to be yours. If you have lost your love for the story, then start something new. But at the same time, you could always come back to it. You never know what will hit you in the furture. I've had that happen many times. My story Half-Blood I wrote for about a month before setting it aside, writing many short stories, and have now jumped back to it and have been flooded with ideas. Criticism is going to be everywhere, you just got to take it and make the best of it, even though sometimes it stings for people to point out that flaws in something you are so proud of. But, since you do ask my opinion, I love the story and the way you write. But, you choose to continue or to set it aside. (: Good luck!