MaxBrown72

 STORY REVISION 
          	
          	   I am starting a revision of the first 19 chapters of Shattered Dreams Academy.
          	
          	 The first thing you will notice is the disappearance of chapters 2,4,6 and 8, since they break momentum.
          	
          	 Then I will go for the minor changes in the chapters, to make the story more fluent, consistent and clear.
          	
          	I hope you will enjoy the changes 

MaxBrown72

 STORY REVISION 
          
             I am starting a revision of the first 19 chapters of Shattered Dreams Academy.
          
           The first thing you will notice is the disappearance of chapters 2,4,6 and 8, since they break momentum.
          
           Then I will go for the minor changes in the chapters, to make the story more fluent, consistent and clear.
          
          I hope you will enjoy the changes