Okay for some strange reason, my computer won't let me see any comments I post or won't let me comment. So.... I just wanted to show you the comment I wanted to post on your story just in case it didn't go through:
WOW. This was amazingly written. I mean there were some little errors, but that didn't bother me at all because this chapter captivated me. I loved the beginning; the description was great. Your voice was strong and spot on. Everything flowed so smoothly. Gah, I want to write like that but hey, everyone has there own style of writing and there is always room for improvement :) Nothing bad to say here.
