MegumisPuppyBoy

guys. if i were to share my new story here could u give me tips on what to do to change it idk if i like my writing style or not atm. its kinda like unserious yappy first person trying to be self aware? but not break the 4th wall? idk if i like it

kuriositystabbedkat

@MegumisPuppyBoy OUUUHH I LOVE IT,, it kinda reminds me of how stage plays are written if that makes sense?? and maybe u can incorporate that into ur writing?? i mostly thought of it cz I'm reading a play for school :sob:
          	  as i was writing this i just remembered a book i read in 6th written in a similar pov to this, it was titled "the bridge home" and the writing style was,, idk how to describe it,, a girl recalling the memories of her dead sister and writing a letter to her, and it was definitely rlly similar to how u wrote in ur oneshot/story
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MegumisPuppyBoy

guys. if i were to share my new story here could u give me tips on what to do to change it idk if i like my writing style or not atm. its kinda like unserious yappy first person trying to be self aware? but not break the 4th wall? idk if i like it

kuriositystabbedkat

@MegumisPuppyBoy OUUUHH I LOVE IT,, it kinda reminds me of how stage plays are written if that makes sense?? and maybe u can incorporate that into ur writing?? i mostly thought of it cz I'm reading a play for school :sob:
            as i was writing this i just remembered a book i read in 6th written in a similar pov to this, it was titled "the bridge home" and the writing style was,, idk how to describe it,, a girl recalling the memories of her dead sister and writing a letter to her, and it was definitely rlly similar to how u wrote in ur oneshot/story
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