OK, I have finished reading the chapter and then we just say…. It was awesome!!!! 🤩
I mean it absolutely nothing felt rushed. I liked that dynamics between all the characters, like sun and his antics with raider and definitely the dynamic between Ivar and his dragon.
Another part I like is how it feels like you captured a good balance between dragon rider and Huntsman, and I’m kind of interested to know if Ivar knows about silver eyed warriors or if it’s just a trait he noticed, and I am definitely looking forward to when raider meets the rest of team RWBY.
Overall, I think this was an amazing chapter. In addition to this story 10 out of 10,
and I won’t rush you to complete it or anything, but I would very much enjoy seeing this story continue, RWBY and how to train your Dragon or some of my favorite stories and I really think this is a good crossover between the two of them so I would very much look forward to see what the story has in store awesome job on this chapter😎🤩🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉