Mille-Feuilles

Many have reported that they did not receive a notification for Chapter 9 of Losing You. So here's your reminder, the latest chapter of that story with EdSer's wedding has been posted :)
          	
          	To the disappointment of @Hayam and many readers, I seem to be able to focus only on one story. So I'd rather focus on Losing You right now and try to be concise to cap it at 15-16 chapters maximum before I can dive in the Aşlı Aşk universe and developp that universe's EdSer.
          	
          	What are your guesses based on the Losing You cover ? 
          	
          	If you have any AU suggestions feel free to drop them, I might be inspired by some and write them on. 
          	
          	Meanwhile enjoy Losing You :) 
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/376634186?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Mille-Feuilles 

aparnaoscar07

@Mille-Feuilles Thanku for posting the link, I didn't get any notification 
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escritora9898

hi baby,  i am here to encourage you,  first of all i love your stories. second let me tell you my story. i am also a edser/hanker writter, i start to write about them in the middle of the year 2023 went the series here in my country anrgentina was on the episode where eda get lost in the snow, i know the series is alredy end in the mayority of the world but i am also writting about them know for a year and a half and i have and amazing 65 followers how grow slowly, perhaps one or two in a month but i write for them but most for me and for what the story gives to me. so, keep writting about them is you like for the time YOU LIKE, not the others and not is fhe fandom gets old. that we love you, the fandom and you as writter are going to keep with you till you decide is time to move on. 
          i also know a girl how fall in love for a dizi call deydreamer or erkenzi kuz and that is a turkish serie from 2018, so, dont feel sad about the time or is the fandom getting old, someone new  will fall in love with this amazing story and going to look for more inspired in them and find your page so, keep going is YOU LIKE THEM. we are here for you. sending lote of hughs, love, kisses and hoping for many more stories. kisses from argentina (Sorry about my english is not good i am still learning)

Mille-Feuilles

Many have reported that they did not receive a notification for Chapter 9 of Losing You. So here's your reminder, the latest chapter of that story with EdSer's wedding has been posted :)
          
          To the disappointment of @Hayam and many readers, I seem to be able to focus only on one story. So I'd rather focus on Losing You right now and try to be concise to cap it at 15-16 chapters maximum before I can dive in the Aşlı Aşk universe and developp that universe's EdSer.
          
          What are your guesses based on the Losing You cover ? 
          
          If you have any AU suggestions feel free to drop them, I might be inspired by some and write them on. 
          
          Meanwhile enjoy Losing You :) 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376634186?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Mille-Feuilles 

aparnaoscar07

@Mille-Feuilles Thanku for posting the link, I didn't get any notification 
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Mille-Feuilles

Constantinople's Cherry has reached an end, I have finally posted its epilogue last week-end for those that didn't read yet. I would love your full reviews on the overall story, what you liked and disliked, and any farewell note about it to me. 
          
          I will be busier onwards and don't want writing to take too much of my times so I will be continuing Losing You because I envision the story quite well and am getting attached to LY EdSer and writing them, but chapters will be shorter, as you have noted, and updates much less frequent.
          
          Aslı Aşk is sort of on hold, not in the way the rest of my short stories are, for whom I honestly have no inspiration, Aslı Aşk is inspiring and I do have the plotline in mind from begining to end, but I haven't got enough time and space of mind to focus on two stories at the same time. 
          
          I really hated how Serkan's cancer was handled in the show and don't even like my own stories about his cancer era because they have to deal with canon Serkan (which they pretty much tuned into an assh*le after the memory loss track). I hope this swap with Eda having cancer and them dealing with fertility issues will be more enjoyable to readers. 
          
          

KatarinaSpulicova

@Mille-Feuilles can’t wait for a new chapter I love your story Losing You
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Mille-Feuilles

Losing you is becoming quite middle lenght at least and will probably takes months to write. We are dealing with the reveal phase, then there's going to be a treatment phase and how EdSer copes with that, and then post-cancer era with fertility issues. The stories expands on 3 years in my mind. 
          
          Aslı Aşk is a bit on hold but I think that too has at least a 15 chapters potential. 
          
          So I wanted to ask my readers if I should leave them the way I started or should I shift them to independant stories of their own ? 
          
          And which is your favourite so far ? That I should focus on more or prioritise ? 
          

AnnaYiannisVlassopou

@Mille-Feuilles I love both, and  all your stories. This is great if we get 15 chapters of each it would be wonderufl. Plus cant wait for CC whenever its ready. As long as we get writing from you Im very happy, as your writing and stories are fantastic.
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hay_am_

@Mille-Feuilles i didn't read losing you yet , but I'm sure aslı aşk is my fav anyway 
            Aslı aşk deserves it's own book , but then it'll mean begging from scratch and collecting new readers nanana so it's a little bit hard
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Tina_o

I love both stories so much! I love both plots and how you are portraying them!
            About the writing, however it’s easier for you ❤️
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MariaAngela948

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Part 3 
          Sorry, you wanted opinions, you're the writer that can provide corrections as to how things really should have played out in the amnesia plot. Eda was strong, she would not have allowed Serkan nor Selin to play their games, she would have moved on waiting for Serkan to pull his head out of his ass. Amnesia or not didn't give him the right to act like an ass.
          Selin could very easily could have been ousted by Ceren & her firm exposing all her crimes to oust her & put her away, something Serkan was never brave enough to do--stand up to Selin & to put Eda first. Engin should have been strong enough & smart enough to support Eda in getting Selin out of the company. She never belonged. 
          So many things that irritated me with the way two strong individuals played out.
          Please continue this plot, but I think you may have to extend over quite a few chapters--Serkan & Selin need to be put in check, Ayden needs to pay for her insensitivity.
          Write on!! (Sorry I got a bit long winded)

MariaAngela948

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Selin vindictiveness I got so sick of, that Serkan was that ignorant & naive to see how he was being played. The show disgust me the way they played him out to be so inconsiderate, rude, disrespectful & a bastard to the very woman who helped his mother & kept his company alive. Even so stupid!! What an ass! 
          Eda was highly intelligent & savvy in her thinking. She drew people because she was respectful, warm knowledgeable in her field of study. She was gorgeous, I always thought the show didn't portray her well; instead they had her being a sap to Serkan's whims & cruelty. Eda deserved n executive & CEO from an equally high firm to court her, NOT the coffee boy Deniz. Let Serkan see what he was missing, hell I wouldn't have changed my clothes for him, he needed to see what he was missing even if he couldn't see straight looking at her. 
          Eda should have held the whip to Serkan & took no sh&t from him or Selin. Selin was a bitch but Eda was 10 times smarter & more loved by many. Selin should never had the upper hand EVER, Eda could easily knock her down, humiliating her motives & swatting her down with all the lawsuits Ceren had ready. She was ousted for espionage among other things.
          I always thought that Ferit, Engin, Erdem, & other Architects should have fought harder for her against Serkan, showing Serkan how inadequate he really was to her, I felt there should have been a romance between her & another architect from another firm to show Serkan the value & worth of Eda. 
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@ MariaAngela948  Eda's character energy and essence was lost in only being a suppletive to Serkan, his family problems, his memory loss, his health issues, his company etc. I agree on that. The show began with a strong and independant girl and I would have liked for things to remain that way but Eda's entire life seemed to circle around Serkan which was frankly annoying as she let go and sacrified all her goals and wishes in life for him. I disagree with her romancing another guy only out of spite and specially one that was Serkan's status level. Eda never cared about status and never looked for money in men, she rather liked other traits and it was actually nice to see her bond with Efe for things she valued like politeness, kindness etc. Eda is a woman and a person of her own, I would have just liked her to focus on the goals in her life and keep the kizlar together as they were, that was enough to me, she doesn't need a man to exist or show off to Serkan.
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MariaAngela948

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RE: Rennaissance
          You always have a lot of angst in your stories. Sometimes I have to wait till they are completed because I can't tolerate so much. But you are good. 
          I'm really disappointed that Serkan is really showing himself to be manipulated by Selin, that his has lost his intellect & can't realize that possibly if everyone is telling him one thing; only one person is telling him another that he accepts Selins lies. (He's supposed to be this genius with a mind that runs a multi-billion company) I never understood what a true coward Serkan was in not taking the initiative to see ALL the facts in front of him BEFORE being the cruel /as*h*le/ he was to Eda. If I was Eda I'd cry, getting it out of my system then leave him to Selin claws since his such a dumbass. Serkan was outright cruel & vindictive to Eda, she took a lot of sh*t from him. Here you write she is pregnant, if she's pregnant I would let her be the one that lays the cards out, screw Serkan & his stupidity to really not see how he's being played. His best friend Engin, Pyril laid it out for him & he still wants to be with Selin, will f*ck him then. Eda should just walk away from him & have Serkan have stipulations as to what his part of custody will be. The huge one being her child will never be allowed in the presence of Selin. Let Eda show the worth of her 45% shares, she was super smart.
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@ MariaAngela948  @ MariaAngela948  I totally agree with your rant on Serkan. At least in the show his character wad completely ruined during memory loss and never recovered for me. He was highly mean, coward and selfish. I don't think however that it was a lack of logic, and it's a detail but I am not thinking or writing Serkan as a multi-billionaire, they're well off but not that much. Millionaire with 2 or 3 millions which is mostly the worth of their companies and properties is more like my taste. Being that rich is far from a sign of intelligence anyway. In Eda's case Serkan has always been lost imo because its about his feelings and not what is logic to him (Selin). I agree that Eda took way too much from him and should have walked out at a point for her own self respect. 
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