Had to cut the original full idea for chapter two in half because I didn't know how to transition the activity correct or in a way that made sense. ^^;
Also, funny thing:
When I write chapters, I plan them out like, "Person goes to get water.
Person then sees friend.
Person talks to friend." and etc.
So, while I began writing chapter three, one sentence (ex, Person tells crush "I love you") turned into about two to three paragraphs.
Just one sentence! Gah! I wish I could publish the book now, but I have to wait until Geeki makes the cover!
*insert 'laughs a bit on the inside'*
I think there a part where I don't know if the sentence makes sense.