BlackRose54

Thank you so much for following me and supporting my stories! Which one did you like?<3

BlackRose54

I can most certainly try! And I understand that, most people in English Teacher are based on people<3
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MishaylaPederson

@BlackRose54 you should try and read my book everyone in my book is a real person except the brother
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completefangirl

so like, with the way the pages i have read are set up, the reader is sometimes unaware of who is saying what exactly.  So without being awear of who us saying what, it becomes very confusing. There is no spacing between statements said by the characters, so, I (the reader) is confused on who exactly is saying what.

completefangirl

Hey I have a suggestion for your story My Best Friends Brother .....if you specify exactly who is saying what,  then I believe that this can be an amazing story and more people can enjoy it. But with the way this stoy is set up it is hard to enjoy and understand. And it may just be me but it is very confusing this way.

MishaylaPederson

@completefangirl I don't get what you're saying. Your not making any sense to me.
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