megha_vvd

Cat-titude is actually a really good one, with unique storyline and fine writing skills but, to be kinda honest, the story somehow looks incomplete and rushed. Jimin and Suga early interactions should be more and how does Jimin already know rhe witch theory? I guess none told you this, but it needs to be mended in order to be 'perfect'. I don't mean to dishonour you and your book, its only that ur story kinda lacks some details and instances at some points, and could have more to it. I hope I didn't sour your mood this time of the day.
          Thank you

megha_vvd

@MisoraYukimura sure, take all your time, I was only suggesting, you don't have to rush anything for my ranting
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MisoraYukimura

@megha_vvd I will! I've been having a writer's block for a while, so re-writing Cat-titude might help me. I appreciate the feedback :D
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megha_vvd

Thanks for understanding my words well, 
            and hopefully taking them into consideration :)
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MsKomorebi

Hello!
          
          I’ve read  “Cat-titude” and I had to tell you that I loved it. I’m drawn to your writing style, I really hope you write more beautiful stories. For now, I’m reading “Sweet sleep tea” but it’s not going to last long enough...
          
          Best wishes:)

MisoraYukimura

I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it albeit some minor details! I'll do my best to bring out better works in the future, although it might take me some time to find inspiration. (＾▽＾)
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megha_vvd

uh no, infact you need to add more descriptions to cat-titude, the Eskimo kiss one (that's how cats kiss) was cute with an emotional backstory attached to it, that was portrayed very well. I suddenly felt the urge to read more of such chapters where the protagonist is telling a tale! Infact you write like a fairytale, it was truly mesmerizing, there are very few books which literally light up my mood here on Wattpad, and seeing some (very little) faults in your book, I couldn't help but come here and talk to you about it.
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MisoraYukimura

@MsKomorebi Hi ☆彡 Thank you so much for reading Cat-titude! I'm glad you enjoyed it, especially since I always end up adding too much description ^^; I actually have ideas for a new book but that will have to wait for when my exams are over (that'll be around 3 months later). Hopefully I'll see you again! (´｡• ᵕ •｡`)
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