KidScarRogueReese
If you ever feel like it; Could you give me feedback on my works? I love you, by the way.
Miss-Believer
@KidScarRogueReese I went over "Catch Me If I Fall". Now, considering that; A, I don't know much of anything about Gravity falls, and, B, I have very little experience with fanfic, I had to really pay attention to what I was reading. Which was only the first chapter. Although, if I did know more about everything, I would have had to pay attention anyways. It's very fast and jarring. Which is preferable. I can't stand slow-moving stories myself. Furthermore, it's very descriptive, but in the quicker way. I'd go for you any day over Jules Verne (Twenty Thousand Leagues was mostly composed of the constand mention of zoophytes). The only real issue I see is that you're in need of editing (feel free to hit me up, if you want). Keep writing this, and make some different things (maybe something other than Gravity that way I can understand, haha). The Believer wishes you luck. ♡
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