MnTexan2

I have edited the 23rd chapter of The Omnitrix bearer of Young Justice. I wasn't proud of the finished product originally, but had no idea what needed adjustment. After a night's worth of sleep I've edited some of it and feel far more confident in what I've put out. Sorry for taking so long to post this chapter to begin with. I'll try to make sure that doesn't happen again in the future.

Haniflexx11

@MnTexan2 It's fine but please don't take years to make at least Finnish one of your story's.
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EE3Roa

@MnTexan2 Was the 23 chapter set after 5 years then Looms should have returned for the marriage between her and Ben. Plus since you gave the canon couples. What about Atheya's empire? Legerdomain under Charmcaster?
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mgenj2004

@MnTexan2 ı'm just happy that see you back
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MnTexan2

I have edited the 23rd chapter of The Omnitrix bearer of Young Justice. I wasn't proud of the finished product originally, but had no idea what needed adjustment. After a night's worth of sleep I've edited some of it and feel far more confident in what I've put out. Sorry for taking so long to post this chapter to begin with. I'll try to make sure that doesn't happen again in the future.

Haniflexx11

@MnTexan2 It's fine but please don't take years to make at least Finnish one of your story's.
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EE3Roa

@MnTexan2 Was the 23 chapter set after 5 years then Looms should have returned for the marriage between her and Ben. Plus since you gave the canon couples. What about Atheya's empire? Legerdomain under Charmcaster?
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mgenj2004

@MnTexan2 ı'm just happy that see you back
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LuxCranel00

Ever thought making story about ben 10 x hoyoverse(honkai impact 3, genshin impact, honkai star rail, tears of thermis and gun girl z)  you know after ben omniverse defeating maultruant, paradox sent ben to hoyoverse world to help them on saving humanity. with omnitrix get upgrades to have all functions(master control, life form lock, ultimate, enchanced, armored & fusion) with Ascalon(since he gonna need all edge he can get fighting godlike beings) have harem maybe. i mean with omnitrix he can scan honkai beast, hilichurcl, abyss order, anti matter legion and fragmentors) i mean i always wonder can omnitrix cure honkai infections and fragmentors infections. again just suggestions.