Felicityafton07
@MommaLunaa , Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I’ve been helping a little with planning/writing the last two chapters of The Bondage and some chapters of The Walls You Paint Red for Me, just to support you while you focus on school and other things. Of course, it’s all up to you how much of it you use or change — I just thought it might make things a bit easier when you’re ready to continue. I’m so excited for all your Funmentores books and will cheer you on every step of the way! ✨ (haven’t done the bondage yet but I’ll let you know): this is gonna be a thread of follow up comments Chapter 14: The Calm Before the Storm • POV: Michael • Plot Ideas: • Michael spends more time with Noah, learning to understand his curse and bloodlust in small doses. • They venture somewhere “normal,” like a park or market, to challenge Noah’s self-control and test their dynamic. • Michael witnesses a “normal” interaction between Noah and others, seeing his friends’ care from another angle. • A mysterious figure or hint of Mr. Williams resurfaces, subtly reminding them that danger isn’t gone. • Themes: Trust, control, fear of harming those you care about.
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Chapter 22: Nightfall
• POV: Michael
• Plot Ideas:
• A tense night scene where Michael’s quick thinking or bravery helps prevent disaster—this could be a minor encounter with an enemy.
• Noah has to restrain himself, showing Michael the terrifying side of his bloodlust, but Michael remains steadfast.
• First real acknowledgment from Noah that Michael is important to him—not just as a “friend-soulmate.”
• Themes: Bravery, sacrifice, tension, emotional revelation.
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Chapter 20: The Gathering
• POV: Mixed (Michael, Jeremy, Natheala, Noah)
• Plot Ideas:
• A gathering of allies, pets, and demons to strategize about Mr. Williams or other external threats.
• Michael observes interactions between characters he’s still unsure about—this can be used to deepen character relationships.
• Tension arises—maybe someone disagrees with Noah’s control methods or strategy, leading to conflict.
• Hint of a betrayal or spy in the group.
• Themes: Teamwork, strategy, conflict resolution, trust and suspicion.
Chapter 21: Crossroads
• POV: Michael or Noah (or dual POV)
• Plot Ideas:
• Michael faces a personal choice: stay safe or actively participate in protecting those he cares about.
• Noah struggles with admitting feelings to Michael—possibly a catalyst event occurs that forces honesty.
• The emotional core of their bond grows stronger, with subtle romantic undertones if you want to develop that thread later.
• Mr. Williams makes a minor move in the background, raising stakes without full confrontation yet.
•Themes: Decision-making, courage, growth, trust.
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Chapter 17: Fireflies in the Dark
• POV: Noah & Michael (dual)
• Plot Ideas:
• A quiet, introspective chapter after a confrontation, possibly returning to the field with fireflies from Chapter 8.
• Michael realizes he’s more than a “friend-soulmate” in Noah’s life.
• Noah admits more openly his fear of hurting Michael but shows trust in small actions.
• Themes: Connection, emotional intimacy, slow healing, soul-bonding.
Chapter 18: Echoes of Danger
• POV: Michael
• Plot Ideas:
• Michael notices subtle signs that Mr. Williams or his new forces are planning something again.
• Noah begins to show slight instability in public, hinting his bloodlust is growing stronger under stress.
• Michael, realizing he might need to protect Noah, starts taking small initiative—perhaps using his intelligence or unique abilities.
• They might encounter a “neutral” demon or pet who could become an ally—or threat—introducing intrigue.
• Themes: Suspense, vigilance, responsibility, fear of loss.
Chapter 19: Breaking Chains
• POV: Noah
• Plot Ideas:
• Noah faces a personal challenge—maybe a moral dilemma or someone pushes him to the edge of his bloodlust.
• Michael intervenes in some way, helping him regain control.
• A quiet, vulnerable moment after this event reinforces their trust and bond.
• Could hint at Noah finally starting to admit his deeper feelings toward Michael.
• Themes: Self-control, vulnerability, reliance, emotional growth.
