MP05

So! First off, the prologue was modified. A simple enhancement to a single section with another single important modification relevant to a point later in the story.
          
          Chapter 1 was completely rewritten and was set at a different point in the story, things should be clearer, and I am going to release it in a few minutes. I am more satisfied with the rewrite than the first one.
          
          Hope you enjoy!

So... as I've stated in my previous post, being that I maybe would rewrite chapters whenever I get something better in mind, and well apparently it's easier to write better on paper rather than on a device... and a few comments that I found helped in the way I would write later on as well as Ideas to make it better popping up a day after posting. 
          
          So chapter 1 is getting a rewrite. Things should be less confusing, more clear, different pace and not a skeleton of a chapter.
          
          I have started the rewrite and I gotta say *compares posted chapter with rewrite* The difference jumps out and screams out everything.
          
          Not to make this too long (even if it already is) the Prologue will also be rewritten. Although the main story of it shouldn't change too much once I start rewriting it.
          
          Anyways, I'll see you all next time.

Releasing the 'first' part of my story... after writing this I know that I've got to improve and I'm definitely going to return to rewrite/add to some parts, whether its when I know what to add/change or when I've completed the book... 
          
          Plot, well it's my first time creating it so I'll try my best with this and I'm just keeping it in my head... I should probably write it down.
          
          Anyways enjoy!

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