I'm thinking, out of the two books Hermione Black and Married in Hogwarts, Hermione Black has more cringeworthy parts and dialogues than Married in Hogwarts does. I don't know, I wrote it like 4 years ago or more and I did start on Hermione Black first but when I look back on certain parts where people have commented, Hermione Black really does make me cringe more. Not a lot, but just more.