xX_Duurp_Xx

How'd you like my story? Please give your honest review and maybe some advice. Thanks! 

MustafaAmer000

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            The story is good but there are two things it doesn't do in the story First: Your short chapter should be between 30 to 35 chapters Second: You must add fighting, comedy, and suspense so that the story becomes better.And i wish you luck for the success of your stories.
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ChrisRiley0

What do you think about Black mha?

ChrisRiley0

@ChrisRiley0 What did you like about it?
            
            Name 3 
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