Boy, I think this is the 3rd time that I've read this story, and the first time I remember correcting your writing ALOT, and then not so much, and this time I just finished the story and I felt that there was SO much missing! Wasn't there a second story to this one, where they get married, and Em becomes a Math teacher and while they move to Hawii, the Em either gets raped, the cause for the move and has twins they raise in Hawaii, where I also see David and M.M. visiting for Christmas and decided to move there and get closer to the family, and I thought that the reason why the just felt so right for each other was because Gina actually did babysit Em in her senior year but stopped when she went to college?? But I'm not sure here, because you never mentioned their age difference, except that she was married and has a kid. Who knows I could be mixing up a story that I read at the start of my SwanQueen gotta read about, but I thought for sure that it was in this story? And stop it, that is what Wattpad IS all about, it's here for authors to write stories and share them, and it goes off of the writers time-line and not the impatient readers demanding your next update!!